They are a tight unit.
Not a social club.
Not as close as siblings.
Nevertheless, a team.
Lives depend on them.
For Information,
for directions,
for timeliness.
There is one captain.
Omnipotent in the air.
A crew of varying levels,
Trained to precision.
The next time you see
them pulling their wagons
across the tarmac
seemingly all talking at once
Don't think of them
as merely a gaggle of uniforms
Give a silent thanks
to the powers that be
The training and discipline
it takes to achieve their level
is beyond mere mortals
in most ways to mention
They do more than merely
look good in their uniforms.
They know which buttons to push.
And they know where the booze is.
Nice flying with you, Captain.
Thanks to your entire crew.
My bag of peanuts was fresh
And my coffee was magic brew.
I wrote this after I read a post by Maggie at Moonstruck about her flight and a last minute trip she and her friends enjoyed recently. Thanks, Maggie for the idea. Instead of using a graphic of a real airplane I chose instead the paper airplane!
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Interesting, I like the poem, I will have to check out the other blog.
nice. yeah, one of those easily overlooked occupations...happy saturday.
I wonder... do you get booze on paper airplanes too? It seems like a much cheaper option!
Your graphic closely resembles the "no-frills-cheap-option" flights I tend to ride (wink).
Sweet poem!
i just kept reading, it was lovely!
Good point.
Hey, if you send me your email, I will happily share a package of that guac mix with you :)
You are SUCH a talented poet, TB. I look forward to them now...
I like the imagery that the paper airplane brings to your verse.
Your poem was fun. I just love it when something out of the ordinary prompts me to write poetry. It's one of life's gifts.
You took a small piece of her post and turned it into magical prose! While I was reading your piece at first I thought you were talking about the luggage trolley folks... but even tho' they too know where the booze is, they don't know where the magic buttons are. Very fun piece Cici!! xoxo PS Now we air travelers need to worry about who is in the control tower!!
I like it. :)
Very nice poetry in motion. I find flying to be amazing and truly a miracle thatwe get anywhere and every where we need to be...thanks for the poem.
TechnoBabe: Your writing continues to open and unfold. I am enjoying your work very much.
good coffee at the end - the best
Nice recognition for a group of people usually in a totally thankless job.
You have a great way with words, Techno.
Have a relaxing weekend!
jj
you are an amazing poet...you know that, right ?
I hope you do !
My brother flies for Southwest. He totally knows where the booze is. :)
Cheers,
SLC
I enjoy the imagery. And what a lovely write, Technobabe! Well done!!
What a terrific poem!!! I loved it! And I think that the paper airplane with it was so much more interesting than a photo of a genuine jet!! Gave the idea, but kept the focus on your words...Lovely post all the way around! ~Janine XO
You have real talent.
Awesome!
Great poem. So often we take them for granted.
Did you hear about the air traffic controller who got in trouble recently for taking his child to work and letting him talk to the pilots?
Great sentiment! Amazing how we tend to take flying in a metal can for granted!
Brilliant
That is awesome! It is like a birthday present to me! (Friday was my birthday)
You know what is the funniest part? That I went to aviation school and took a course to be a stewardess but then after I took a teacher training course and headed for another direction my friends working at the airlines want me to fly the skies but I dont know...
And I thank you for considering my post as an inspiration. :)
You are a wonderful writer!
At first I thought that you were talking about the military in a highway caravan! It works that way too!
Great going, TB. Makes me wanna call up for a rezzy to . . . somewhere anywhere!
great words i adore your prose
I would like to say that flying is fun, etc. these days, but mostly it is a hassle. I am glad to get where I need to be and back without too many delays.
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